Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Revision on CATW 1

       To many students they cannot able to go college because most of college tuition fees are expensive. And in the passage, “An Education in Citizenship” by Chicago Tribune says that young people who are illegal immigrants in Illinois’s state are now allowed to pay in state tuition fees and that was law which was passed recently by Illinois House, which it should not be. The citizens of this country believe that all the work of government should be done with the framework of law. A making distinction is hard but it needs to be done because of a person’s legal right and it says that immigration law has to done before it too late. I completely agree with the passage that “The nation sorely needs to reform it complex, often-unenforced immigration laws. But until that day comes, it cannot blithely ignore those laws.”
       First of all, Money that comes from federal grant is from our citizen or legal parents, who work very hard and pay their taxes. Like my parents work extra hours and sometime double shift but when I asked for pocket money they said they didn’t have much money because their half of money deducted by federal tax and they said the money that  took from them will help me when I go to college because most of college run with federal money. I was saddened and upset when I read a paper that the illegal students are allowed to pay state rate tuition fees like me even their parents has not pay penny to Federal tax.  I felt like my parent money is used to other national students.
       It is unfair to the citizen if they are treated same like illegal immigrants even though they do not follow the rules and regulation. Spending the citizen tax money on illegal immigrants is making hard to the states people families to survive. Like I recently read a newspaper and it stated that U.S population is decreasing in number and one important factor was a child high tuition fees. One family member said that they could effort to bring two or more children in their life because they could not able to provide full and proper child education. This is clearly shows that how our government is helping their own people child education. Our government should concerned and invest more on their citizen’s children education then the illegal immigrant.
         Therefore, Illinois law house should have done research properly before they passed the law that illegal immigrants students can pay in state tuition fee rate by using U.S citizenship people money. The money that federal collects from their citizen should be used to benefit for their people and their children education because the children are raising star of their nation and seeds of future

1 comment:

  1. I'm jamal and i'm commenting on your revision on catw 1. Your summary does not fully state the main idea.For example you don't mention how the reading states that illegal immigrants don't have to pay the out of state fees.In the summary you also don't mention whether you agree or disagree you just took a sentence from the text at the end of your introduction.Your grammar is way off so I couldn't really grasp what point you where trying to make.In the body paragraphs their is no relation to the texts.The text doesn't say anything about u.s citizens being treated the same as illegal immigrants. You should try and stay on track with what the reading is about

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